Tuesday 12 June 2018

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Hi my name is Malikai. I have been at Riverdale School for four years.  I am a year 6 student. Me and my friends play basketball and sometimes I play touch and  ball rush. It is fun. I am 10 nearly 11.  I am the second oldest in our school
This year I am looking forward to going on holiday with my grandparents. Dame Valerie Adams really inspires me. She works very hard to be good at what she does.

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  1. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 09:30

    Kia ora, I am Matt from Makauri School.
    I have just read your profile and wow I really liked how you described why you like playing basketball and touch. I thought it was really cool that you were so excited to go on holiday with your grandparents.
    I learnt that you are a year 6 and you are the 2nd oldest in the school WOW!!
    Just a little tip for next time maybe explain why you look up Valerie Adams so much but I know she is incredible so I can see why you look up to her.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog here

    Mā te wā
    Matt - Makauri school

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  2. Ruby13 August 2018 at 13:47

    Kia Ora, I'm Ruby, from Ormond School.
    I just replied to your comment on my blog.
    I though it was really sweet that you were looking forward to the holidays with your grandparent.
    I learnt that you are the second oldest in your school, I'm the first oldest in my School and Family.
    Maybe next time add more about your class and what your goals are this year.

    Ruby

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